VIRTUE
In the day I bend to my work. Sometimes raking the fallen leaves that scatter across the gold-green meadows that border the forest. Sometimes painting the white washed, wooden fences of the great estate. There are many chores to do in such a fine place as this. I work and watch every day as the maidens come forth, in their exquisite gowns with their tiaras of platinum and gold sitting atop their carefully coiffured tresses, to play with the Unicorns.
The great, rainbow-colored beasts kneel and touch their chalk-white horns to the green grass in tribute to the roses of virtue and virginity that are the maidens. The maids shyly, slyly, glance at each other from beneath lowered lashes and pet the shining horns knowing that only the purest of the pure may touch a Unicorn’s horn. Then, in the long, late afternoon shadows, they troop back into the castle.
They never look at me, of course. I am merely the hired girl of the estate. Plain and possessed of only the simplest garments of homespun wool and cheapest cotton. With rough hands and smelling of sweat, I am less than nothing in their eyes.
But, when the dark comes and the moon rises to sail the depths of the sky, the forests rustle softly and the great beasts come to me. Their quiet nickering and the scent of their lust surrounds me as I lie down and open to them and am transported to the place where only they can take me.
Sometimes, not often, I look at the sleeping castle, think of the maids within and laugh.
July 22, 2011 at 8:30 pm
This is beautifully written Bill. Like something carved out of glass.
July 23, 2011 at 5:40 pm
Thanks Richard. you know it means a lot coming from you.
July 23, 2011 at 5:17 pm
Didn’t expect that ending! Excellently descriptive writing took the focus off any possible trick ending…beautifully executed!
July 23, 2011 at 5:41 pm
Thanks so much, daz. It was fun to write.
July 25, 2011 at 3:31 am
This would blend right in with ’1,001 Nights’ only it’s Aj style. I enjoyed the words ‘sleeping castle’ in contrast to the simple maiden being awake and sensually alive. Beautiful.
July 25, 2011 at 4:35 am
Thanks Jodi. And Argggg me Beauty.
July 25, 2011 at 5:33 am
Lovely and satisfying!
July 25, 2011 at 5:39 am
Thanks Lara. Glad you liked it.
July 25, 2011 at 10:29 pm
This is a beautiful, emotive piece. Your description is fabulous. And I love the rainbow coloured unicorns with white horns.
July 25, 2011 at 10:37 pm
Thanks Jo. As I said on your page your’s rocks the house.
July 27, 2011 at 11:06 am
That’s really beautiful.
Took me right there, watching things as they unfolded. Errr, not that I’m a voyeur or anything.
July 27, 2011 at 2:42 pm
Thanks E-Blot. Voyeur? Never! Connoisseur? Always.
July 29, 2011 at 5:31 pm
Nice, aj. Good, descriptive piece. I really like it.
July 29, 2011 at 5:35 pm
Thanks Bob. Was fun to write.
July 30, 2011 at 6:49 pm
Good story! I didn’t see that ending coming. Naughty unicorns.
July 30, 2011 at 7:02 pm
Thanks Louise. Yup, gotta watch those guys when the sun goes down.
July 30, 2011 at 11:50 pm
Lovely and descriptive, despite being brief.
July 31, 2011 at 12:22 am
Thanks B. It pretty much sums what I thought i might know about unicorns, so it had to be brief.
August 2, 2011 at 8:06 pm
This is great! There is a lot here without a lot of words. I’m very impressed
August 4, 2011 at 12:03 am
Thanks BA.
August 6, 2011 at 11:41 pm
Fucking gorgeous. Blood and gold flow from your pen, sir.
August 7, 2011 at 1:22 am
Thanks Buddy. Always like it when my friends like a story.
August 9, 2011 at 10:50 pm
Well written. I can imagine everything. Flows well and keeps my attention!
August 9, 2011 at 11:40 pm
Thanks Lindsay. Glad you liked it.